Oney's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[[KK] Chris O'Neill Raped]

Damn

Its like real life!

TheRammaJamma responds:

OMG U R FAMOUZ RITE?!?!?!?

[Hammer & Fail]

'Massive Tool'

Colors, sound, backgrounds, animation, humor, all improvin' baby. nice one eddy pies.

eddsworld responds:

Thanks O'neilly.

[Starbarians Teaser]

Bitchin'

I love that shot of the space ship, fucking awesome. Music's insane and art ad animation just top notch. your voice recordings sound way better than ever before. take a breather fag

HappyHarry responds:

Thanks for the... EIGHT?!

[How to be a Vblogger!]

zach

you sold out to the man

psychicpebbles responds:

the only thing i sell is sex

[The Apple Situation]

damn man

That was hilarious. The voice acting is what made it!

SirReginald responds:

cock

[Flash Ahh]

Needs Improvement

I didn't care for the backgrounds, most of the time was just a pale solid blue for a BG, kind of an unattractive color. A lot of the characters body parts looked mega rushed, when flash points to the kid asking for the phone it looked pretty shabby, the pose, the anatomy, and the line quality. The lip sync was dreadful, you literally can't have put any effort into that, I saw V and F mouth shapes in sentences where they weren't even saying anything like that at all, learn the basic mouth shapes and actually time them. Don't just draw random mouth shapes and hope for the best. The humor wasn't there at all, the whole idea has already been done at least twice... very recently. 2 things that really irritated me was how little research you did for the flash. He looks absolutely nothing like that, also when steve jobs laughs he just stands there static and sound comes out, not effective at all. I know this seems really harsh but its the only way you can ever really drive yourself to improve, if you listen to all the little kids giving you 10's you aint gonna get better, good luck.

just2pale responds:

Thanks Oney - I see and understand your points. This animation was not meant to be a great masterpiece. You are probably right and I should have taken a bit more time on parts - even I admit that. The point was just to get a short joke out in a short time. I realize this joke isn't new, but I tried to give it my own take and style.

As far as Flash Character Design - I just did a simple design. I know how the Flash looks this was done on purpose. I just gave him simple features and its fun to animate this way. Plus to each his own right?

I think I did a decent job getting the joke out in this animation. Not great by any means, but fair enough to say it works as is.

Thank you for taking the time to give criticisms - I will take these into account for future... Now get your ass to making Leo and Satan III !!!!!

[Bees in love]

Daw Mister Sean

Keep on improvin' ya hear!

Seankiely responds:

i hear ya loud and clear sir

[Sonic Chaos]

I really love this

It's incredible

golfinho responds:

o.o !! your are Oney

[The Undergrounds PILOT EP]

dawwww

thanks for the music and character cameos guys, keep at it, practise your art, and make the story more readable. the sound was very well recorded!

10JD responds:

WOH? Thank you Oney, I wasnt sure how you would react to me borrowing you characters im glad enjoyed it. Thanks :) your criticism means a bundle to me! Ill take it to heart!

[TANKMEN]

LOL

You're so much better than I could ever be JohnnyUtah! Please teach me your magical ways!

JohnnyUtah responds:

oh don't be so hard on yourself!