Oney's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snowballs]

Thatta boy

Suited styled animation, crystal clear sound and good humor, Suck a dick!

psychicpebbles responds:

only urs

[Eskimos]

sorry

but i gotta say that was really not enjoyable. the music really killed it. Silence and wind coulda worked better. Not only was the music to loud but it was horribly unsuited. Also the art was boring for the most. Also the voices were all badly recorded apart from Jaxxy's. The jokes COULD have been funny if the music hadn't destroyed the mood of them. Sorry to lower the score but gotta speak my feelings. At least you can improve these things for next time!

[Zanta Claws III]

gee whiz

That is one major improvement in all sectors. Humor, animation and sound. Really digged it, nice one you stupid dick <3

eddsworld responds:

Oh Oney, you always know just what to say. :'D

[Cute Explosion]

maaaaan

I fucking love your animation, it's just plain tasty. The song was great too, I really like this. Only one concern. You tend to throw in internet memes far to much in your toons these days. really cheap laughs. That's the -1 from me, good job though!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks oney!
its true, i like raptor jesus. i just...like him. i don't care if he's an old meme, i want to have his raptor babies.
but for this toon, i was following direction. i didn't actually know who the rainbow guy or what the smiley face was before making this.

[Gamer Tonight Indie Dev]

Average

Basically the humor wasn't there for me, and the art didn't have the nice design and style it once had. I felt like richard just had no emotion in this one, he just stared and smiled most of the time. When he was surprised he just sat there in a normal sitting position with a weak shocked expression. You had little time to do this, and I know it sucks to get negative feedback on something you put alot of effort into, but you'll know for next time the things that took away the flare. keep at it!

RubberNinja responds:

Valid points!! Thanks for the review!

[ASDF Christmas]

hahaha

hot darn

[Ryu: Then and Now]

uwwq

i like how stampers voice is super reverbed and yours is crystal clear

[Press Start: Chores 3]

i dunno man

these just ain't improving. you should get someone to redraw the symbols, thats all you need. the humor is OK, nothing special, the sound is good. the drawings and animation is just fucking awful. It looks like its being drawn by a 7 year old, pay someone to just redraw the essentials, then you can just re use them!

[Circle n' Square 2]

my god

your original was my favourite by far, and that was just fantastic.

[Prof Oaks Research]

jesus christ

Either hire someone to assassinate that voice actor or don't ever fucking use him again. He can't voice act worth a damn and his mic is absolutely horrible. As for the rest of the flash I feel like most of it horribly rips off that horrible VGCats comic where they're trying to breed chocobos (not the punchline, but the execution). The drawing's were boring, and the humor... I'M ANNOYING AIN'T I FUNNY? Spongebob is usually funny cos he's annoying someone but he's not in your fucking face about it. Seriously, try to at least improve the sound for next time. 1 step at a time.

remixV4 responds:

What was wrong with the actor? I thought the emotion behind each line was well suited for what needed to be said O.o

As for sound, I guess I could hear a slight hiss with "S" sounds, but nothing else seemed noticeably bad without blaring your speakers (which screws up most sounds anyway).

I agree on the Vgcats thing. I noticed the similarity partway through myself. You really thought the drawings were "boring"? I've noticed your animations, so I guess anything looks like garbage in comparison to someone who can actually draw well lol.

And yes, Ash was meant to be overbearingly annoying.

Constructive critisism is great, but at least try to sound helpful. I almost missed your valid points because you started off like a typical troll.