Oney's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inside the mind of Craig]

You've gotten this enough already

but why stick-men, you can obviously draw, you have an amazing sense of timing, but you still use stick-men. If you make these PURELY for fun, hoping not to achieve anything that's cool. Otherwise the simple fact you use stick figures in these movies gives you a significantly lower chance of ever getting opportunities in animation. You actually put some effort into making the stick-men look good, but why not just use the same amount of effort to draw a full character?

[How to be a Vblogger!]

zach

you sold out to the man

psychicpebbles responds:

the only thing i sell is sex

[The Apple Situation]

damn man

That was hilarious. The voice acting is what made it!

SirReginald responds:

cock

[Sergio and Bear]

Man that was funny

I loved the style. That was sweet. Really funny, the only thing I didn't like was the ending. Coulda been funnier. I really loved that tho, good job.

[Titanomachina]

Damn man

That was really interesting. I loved the effects and the whole epic effect. The design of everything was awesome, lovely color and animation. You make tweens look so natural. The only reason for the negative 2 was rehashing the same walk cycle over and over, but it wasn't that annoying. Well done.

[Backwards Day]

Pretty Good

The animation was really nice, as was the color. Music was cute, I think the main characters voice was unsuited and the voice was badly recorded, it clipped a lot. The fish's voice was great, sounded a bit to reverby though, just slightly. So yeah basically just record better next time, great effort though, keep it up.

[Thank You Art Collage]

Shit Man

Nearly all them pictures are insane, thank fuck your dogs are back!

[Neenja 3]

Storytelling skills need improvement

You are a ridiculously talented artist and animator, but there was so many little annoying things that distracted me from the actual story itself.
That first background outside the house with the cute little cars was awesome, after seeing that I was focusing on more backgrounds, but almost straight away they weren't half as good as that opening.
That was super distracting.
Also, I feel like the color of the main characters are a little bit dull, like just A TAD gray.
The voices (I'm sorry) are horribly unlikable. Especially the kid with the hat, he's such an annoying character, just from the way he talks.
Also the pacing of the conversation is really slow, there's mad pauses every time they speak.
The thing that annoyed me most was how you edited the music. You had it fade out for when Neenja was putting on his gear. I felt it would have been way more epic, if it just started abruptly with no fade in and the camera just started on his eyes or something.
Also sound was a major issue. The mic quality is decent, but maybe learn to add reverb, when they're standing in an open street it still sounds like your speaking in a small room.
Some minor sound effects were kinda shabby too, like when the massive guy bursts through the wall, it felt half assed and really weak. The sound going out of sync ruined the whole experience too.

You have a great concept for a great series, I just don't wanna see you ruin it due to little things that can be easily fixed.

Good luck!