umm
why did you reintroduce all the characters again, are you going to reintroduce them every time you make a new episode
why is doubling beeped out, and the british guy not when he says bollocks
why are you still beeping doubling out, or having him curse for no reason
if this game is based far into the future why is doubling comparing tome to the matrix or inception, wouldn't they be old obscure movies in this time period
additionally dancing. what
there is no tension when they are stalking gamecrazed or when they enter the mansion, cos the stupid fucking unsuited music is always a yappin
theres on shot where kirbopher and nylock look all terrible and sketchy, what happened were they mugged
why is doublings sister also a professional hacker, thats highly unlikely, my sisters not an animator and i don't have aids
why is she all slimey like doubling, why would she choose the same class, does she have a crush on her brother
why did nylock ask her if she was related to doubling straight off the bat, that's just stupid, if I'm a gnome in world of warcraft am i related to every other gnome IRL, i know she has the same powers but that leads me to another point, the people playing tome seem to be able to make a character with ANY power they want, and any appearance they want, so basically it feels more like an alien world far more than a video game. why not have some jokes relating to MMO videogames, like guys constantly jumping around or have an obvious cock walking around, if they game has THAT much creative options why not.
there was one shot where that hacker girl was on top of the building, and she was made of terrible gradients
'why did you fall, i dont know.' thats really poor writing and i know its hard to know if a joke is good when YOU write it if but whoever you showed this to while making it didnt say 'thats fucking stupid' you should block and delete them cos they dunno what funny is
the entire story furthered nothing
I think you're not changing any of the obvious flaws cos you've already started with them and it'd be weird if the whole style suddenly changed, just changed everything slightly per episode, or don't. I know I don't have to watch these, but you don't have to make cartoons either.