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Storytelling skills need improvement

You are a ridiculously talented artist and animator, but there was so many little annoying things that distracted me from the actual story itself.
That first background outside the house with the cute little cars was awesome, after seeing that I was focusing on more backgrounds, but almost straight away they weren't half as good as that opening.
That was super distracting.
Also, I feel like the color of the main characters are a little bit dull, like just A TAD gray.
The voices (I'm sorry) are horribly unlikable. Especially the kid with the hat, he's such an annoying character, just from the way he talks.
Also the pacing of the conversation is really slow, there's mad pauses every time they speak.
The thing that annoyed me most was how you edited the music. You had it fade out for when Neenja was putting on his gear. I felt it would have been way more epic, if it just started abruptly with no fade in and the camera just started on his eyes or something.
Also sound was a major issue. The mic quality is decent, but maybe learn to add reverb, when they're standing in an open street it still sounds like your speaking in a small room.
Some minor sound effects were kinda shabby too, like when the massive guy bursts through the wall, it felt half assed and really weak. The sound going out of sync ruined the whole experience too.

You have a great concept for a great series, I just don't wanna see you ruin it due to little things that can be easily fixed.

Good luck!

When tingle breaks in

I cannot help but shit myself at the facial expressions. I'm also a sucker for the color, nice one man.

Daw Mister Sean

Keep on improvin' ya hear!

Seankiely responds:

i hear ya loud and clear sir

I really love this

It's incredible

golfinho responds:

o.o !! your are Oney

dawwww

thanks for the music and character cameos guys, keep at it, practise your art, and make the story more readable. the sound was very well recorded!

10JD responds:

WOH? Thank you Oney, I wasnt sure how you would react to me borrowing you characters im glad enjoyed it. Thanks :) your criticism means a bundle to me! Ill take it to heart!

LOL

You're so much better than I could ever be JohnnyUtah! Please teach me your magical ways!

JohnnyUtah responds:

oh don't be so hard on yourself!

derp

I really love how this literally has nothing to do with tankman, and doesn't stay true to the series at all, except the whole black and white thing.

I've reviewed your stuff before and I've left certain comments on various things that you could improve on, but a year has passed and nope. nothing's changed.

I'm done.

hah!

I know this is old, but fuck man was it enjoyable.

peixeaquatico responds:

Old but gold !!

Thanks Mr.Satan

I cannot help but like this

the animation is so damn average, it's highly unorigional and you just reference just about anything. but you must put you heart into it. plus that part with mistys head was fucking incredible. I dunno why but i wanna see more.

rofl

couldn't help bursting out laughing at that

TheSpicanator responds:

ahhh the man him self!

A great pleasure to know that it made you laugh friend!
thanks!

I love this site.

Chris O'Neill @Oney

Age 34, Male

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Wexford, Ireland.

Joined on 4/28/06

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