Let me first start off by saying this series is fucking retarded. I don't understand it and I have no idea why david is in links place or what the fuck in general is going on, HOWEVER your art improves every time, You're funny, you have a very good sense of timing and the little action bits you do ain't actually half bad. This reminds me of shit I used to make in the past. I think david's a funny character, I like how you've made him badass, I think you should maybe focus less on referencing anything you can and maybe get him into situations that aren't copyrighted. Get some original music too from teh audio portal, it'll help you in the long run, good luck bro, you have potential.
I think you have some valid points, you told them very well. i will say that video games have definitely inspired me in many ways. Still great presentation, good job.
Yeah, I can understand why that would happen, I blame a combination of inexperience when I started the film and having the project stretch out over so many months. Practice makes perfect I suppose.
Art, sound, story, humor, voices. All amazing. Great job dude, I love your style, the only reason its not a 10 (I'm not joking) is for the 'shot me in the butt' line, and the cheesy anime-ish ending pan. Just me, I didn't think it was funny. But that's a real nitpick on something dumb that probably only bothered me so congrats, amazing flash.
So I don't really give a shit what people think, I strongly believe in people having their own beliefs, but you state everything in this video as if its a matter of fact. I can try but I don't think I'll find a chocolate or whatever you call it inside my body, no matter what way you dissect my fat ass. Also I really think you've destroyed your signiture character, I'm not gonna explain it. Watch a previous patchman toon, then watch this. Patchman what the fuck are you doing. It also adds a nice hefty shit blow seeing as these are the first times you hear patchman speak. OH BOY PATCHMAN IS TALKING WHATS HE GONNASAY OH BOY
patchman no why are you shouting your beliefs at me
As for sound and animation... There is no animation, reused poses and google images. Sorry man its just my feelings I cant help what I feel. :(
It's all good bro, most people will feel that way after the first lesson. Give it a few more, you may begin to see things differently once we get into the geometries.
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Rated 4 / 5 stars July 4, 2011
This is fucking crazy
Let me first start off by saying this series is fucking retarded. I don't understand it and I have no idea why david is in links place or what the fuck in general is going on, HOWEVER your art improves every time, You're funny, you have a very good sense of timing and the little action bits you do ain't actually half bad. This reminds me of shit I used to make in the past. I think david's a funny character, I like how you've made him badass, I think you should maybe focus less on referencing anything you can and maybe get him into situations that aren't copyrighted. Get some original music too from teh audio portal, it'll help you in the long run, good luck bro, you have potential.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 16, 2011
gotta say, that was moving
I think you have some valid points, you told them very well. i will say that video games have definitely inspired me in many ways. Still great presentation, good job.
Rated 4 / 5 stars June 14, 2011
Immature
8 ou of 10
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 8, 2011
HGAGA
RACISM
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 17, 2011
really like the design
Good job man, only complaint is at some points I didn't follow it so well, try make it more readable, but yeah well done man, that was cool!
Yeah, I can understand why that would happen, I blame a combination of inexperience when I started the film and having the project stretch out over so many months. Practice makes perfect I suppose.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 16, 2011
i didn't like the first 2
but yeah that was pretty funny
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 14, 2011
am i trippin
hfshaklssf
haha well thanks for the review! You're awesome dude :3
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 1, 2011
Amazing job
Art, sound, story, humor, voices. All amazing. Great job dude, I love your style, the only reason its not a 10 (I'm not joking) is for the 'shot me in the butt' line, and the cheesy anime-ish ending pan. Just me, I didn't think it was funny. But that's a real nitpick on something dumb that probably only bothered me so congrats, amazing flash.
The ending pan was supposed to be a fully animated chase scene but I was so sick of making run cycles so yeah. haha. Thanks man!
Rated 1 / 5 stars April 25, 2011
alright
So I don't really give a shit what people think, I strongly believe in people having their own beliefs, but you state everything in this video as if its a matter of fact. I can try but I don't think I'll find a chocolate or whatever you call it inside my body, no matter what way you dissect my fat ass. Also I really think you've destroyed your signiture character, I'm not gonna explain it. Watch a previous patchman toon, then watch this. Patchman what the fuck are you doing. It also adds a nice hefty shit blow seeing as these are the first times you hear patchman speak. OH BOY PATCHMAN IS TALKING WHATS HE GONNASAY OH BOY
patchman no why are you shouting your beliefs at me
As for sound and animation... There is no animation, reused poses and google images. Sorry man its just my feelings I cant help what I feel. :(
It's all good bro, most people will feel that way after the first lesson. Give it a few more, you may begin to see things differently once we get into the geometries.
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 12, 2011
hey
this is my favorite video of all time