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christ dude, you're fucking funny

Speedo responds:

Oh, you ;)
Thanks haha GLAD YOU LIKE

There is absolutely no way you enjoyed making this. No way. I'm awestruck that you've decided to keep using the cop out move of doing those paper sketches instead of the already bad animation you had going. I know they're for flashbacks, but no. They are terrible. The second I see them I know for 100% fact you got bored and wanted to get this shit over with, and I don't blame you. Everyone gets bored animating but usually instead of resorting to the easiest way around it they take a break and come back to it to finish it the way it should be. Besides the obvious laziness, this cartoon was fucking stupid. There was absolutely no reason for it to exist. None. Nothing was developed.

Yo man, I really love your cartoons, but these fall very short due to the writing. You're an extremely funny guy, why do you have a dude doing the writing for you? The animation and production quality is awesome, I just don't emote to these at all.

Hey I remember you leaving NG for bigger and better things on Youtube, surely this isn't it? The artwork hasn't improved in the slightest in like 3 years. The style you use is extremly flat and unlikable, the colors are dull and boring. The sound is fine, the content and humor is unbearable, from the constant whining to the <3 faces your characters always use. The idea of annoyed person dealing with stupid idiot has been done this exact same way a million times before and brings nothing new to the concept.

I'm not going out of my way to be a jerk here, I've left constructive reviews in the past which you replied angrily to and you STILL haven't improved a fraction over your previous work.

Stiff animation, terrible humor, annoying style, no improvement. If you improve at least 1% I'll eat my words, until then your cartoons are just gonna sit in a raw state of averageness.

*****

fucking hilarious

SardonicSamurai responds:

Quit lying

Improvement!

What I liked

*More variety in music!
*Better art for the talky talk parts. (A lot of the animated parts still looked rushed as hell, the part where he held out his hand made me lol)
*Dialogue flowed better overall.
*No more pointless cursing or beeps, good on ya. ;)

What I hated

*Dumbass demon character. The buildup is to short, when you finally hear and see him in action it's a giant facepalm. He need's money for school? Maybe he should cancel his subscription to TOME and get a job.
*The girl that keeps smelling her finger. What's her fucking problem she needs stop that. I feel like you give certain habits to characters to keep the viewer interested, not cause you actually think it's interesting yourself? That finger smelling is an anime cliche, you obviously know this, there's no way you thought it'd be cool if she for no reason smelt her finger every 2 seconds. DUDE CLICHES ARE BAD. NO ONE LIKES THEM.
*Also, you're writing certain characters for certain demographics, Whyti. Jesus fucking christ. Never in all my days have I witnessed such a stupid, pointless, forced character. Nothing she says is cute, funny, or interesting. I know 2 friends for flamegirl were needed to get that scene across, but at least make them likable, why would anyone want to be friends with these people. Please kill her off, she's just awful.
*Nylocke's 'running gag' is just... :(
*Why is there a cafe in a game, seems pretty dumb a bunch of teens would log onto a MMO just to sit down in a virtual cafe to talk about boys teehee! (maybe roleplay, but roleplay cafes cmon) Also the way they act never really seems like they're in a video game, sure its for the story telling, but have little things to hint that what we are watching is in fact an MMO, it IS what the entire show is about after all. Speaking of boys and girls teehee everyone is super excited about a guy and a girl TALKING over the internet. What the fuck is wrong with these people.
*Aplha being embarrassed by how he was acting in a video game. When I kill someone in halo I don't apologize for acting out of line, I don't kneel down and say a prayer. Also Alpha's badass WHICH WAY DID THEY HEAD TOWARDS was a bit over the top. AND when Whyti says 'Nylocke, don't be a hero'? ITS A FUCKING VIDEO GAME. These people have serious issues.
*Raven fags character design. Why does this guy look like such a douche, make villains actually threatening. Also why does that Demon have bart simpson hair.
*Certain shots of people with crossed arms or certain poses. Just have some reference up in front of you, I can't draw ANYTHING good without reference up in front of me, but who cares. What matters is the ending result of your cartoon, use reference for everything, whether it be anatomy, what windows in a building look like, or how bat wings are supposed to look.

Overall some improvement, keep it up.

cute

I like it a whole bunch, the art is really clean and cute and the sounds pretty fuckin clear. I'm gonna be super specific on what bugged me, cos that's the kind of fag i am. The echo when he says internet sounded really, not like an echo. I also think the last pose of tomar saying ROSS YOU SON OF A to be really inexpressive, and so was the voice acting for that part. The rest was swell, but i think throughout the toon there was a very slight awkwardness between the conversation, like very slight pauses. Just my opinion, keep going jyaxxay

jaxxy responds:

Thanks, Oney! I like fags like you and thanks for the great crit. Appreciate it. Imma work on my expressiveness. I hope my better half takes this into consideration too so we can make the next one way better.

u guys ripped off my idea

now i can never make skydogs

JohnnyUtah responds:

oney wanted to give me a 7 but he just couldn't bring himself to do it.

charlie manson would run the fuck away from you

this is insane crazy bullshit and you're totally convinced all this is true cos you read it somewhere. read this. the earth is not aware of anything. this is insane psycho babble. how the hell can someone believe one word of this, how can you say religion is bullshit and spend days working on these videos.

congrats on your vewwy fiwst cult!

RiverJordan responds:

Hey Oney! You're aware, so what makes you think the rest of life isn't?

I love this site.

Chris O'Neill @Oney

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