Sorry, got tired fast
I think something you should focus on improving is keeping your designs consistant. Constantly throughout the cutscenes and game the dragons arms were getting longer, he was going from skinny to fat, one second the squirrels eyes are normal black squirrel eyes, then they are cartoony. (maybe that was intentional I dunno) Even in your promo pic on your page the squirrel has crazy huge human hands, but I guess that was just a poke towards sonic or something, however all the other things that weren't consistant have me thinking if it was. The colors were nice and the animation was fine, but the design was kinda crazy. I found it hard to distinguish hazards from the background, unless they were obvious birds or something. Also the game isn't really anything new,first thing that shot into my mind was robot unicorn attack. Basically don't dive straight into projects in future, think about what you're gonna do and have some reference up in front of you, so you dont get all these inconsistent errors. Good luck!