Damn
Its like real life!
Damn
Its like real life!
OMG U R FAMOUZ RITE?!?!?!?
'Massive Tool'
Colors, sound, backgrounds, animation, humor, all improvin' baby. nice one eddy pies.
Thanks O'neilly.
Bitchin'
I love that shot of the space ship, fucking awesome. Music's insane and art ad animation just top notch. your voice recordings sound way better than ever before. take a breather fag
Thanks for the... EIGHT?!
zach
you sold out to the man
the only thing i sell is sex
damn man
That was hilarious. The voice acting is what made it!
cock
Needs Improvement
I didn't care for the backgrounds, most of the time was just a pale solid blue for a BG, kind of an unattractive color. A lot of the characters body parts looked mega rushed, when flash points to the kid asking for the phone it looked pretty shabby, the pose, the anatomy, and the line quality. The lip sync was dreadful, you literally can't have put any effort into that, I saw V and F mouth shapes in sentences where they weren't even saying anything like that at all, learn the basic mouth shapes and actually time them. Don't just draw random mouth shapes and hope for the best. The humor wasn't there at all, the whole idea has already been done at least twice... very recently. 2 things that really irritated me was how little research you did for the flash. He looks absolutely nothing like that, also when steve jobs laughs he just stands there static and sound comes out, not effective at all. I know this seems really harsh but its the only way you can ever really drive yourself to improve, if you listen to all the little kids giving you 10's you aint gonna get better, good luck.
Thanks Oney - I see and understand your points. This animation was not meant to be a great masterpiece. You are probably right and I should have taken a bit more time on parts - even I admit that. The point was just to get a short joke out in a short time. I realize this joke isn't new, but I tried to give it my own take and style.
As far as Flash Character Design - I just did a simple design. I know how the Flash looks this was done on purpose. I just gave him simple features and its fun to animate this way. Plus to each his own right?
I think I did a decent job getting the joke out in this animation. Not great by any means, but fair enough to say it works as is.
Thank you for taking the time to give criticisms - I will take these into account for future... Now get your ass to making Leo and Satan III !!!!!
Daw Mister Sean
Keep on improvin' ya hear!
i hear ya loud and clear sir
I really love this
It's incredible
o.o !! your are Oney
dawwww
thanks for the music and character cameos guys, keep at it, practise your art, and make the story more readable. the sound was very well recorded!
WOH? Thank you Oney, I wasnt sure how you would react to me borrowing you characters im glad enjoyed it. Thanks :) your criticism means a bundle to me! Ill take it to heart!
LOL
You're so much better than I could ever be JohnnyUtah! Please teach me your magical ways!
oh don't be so hard on yourself!
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