The animation was really nice, as was the color. Music was cute, I think the main characters voice was unsuited and the voice was badly recorded, it clipped a lot. The fish's voice was great, sounded a bit to reverby though, just slightly. So yeah basically just record better next time, great effort though, keep it up.
Nearly all them pictures are insane, thank fuck your dogs are back!
Holy Shit man
You've been making flash for 7 fucking years. Absolutely NOTHING has improved, the way their arms move, the overall drawing quality, the random ass lip sync, the awful Mic recording, the stale formula of them complaining, fucking NOTHING has improved.
Thanks to the fans for keeping up with all things Foamy. (Especially the ones who have posted constructive critisim in their reviews) Seriously, it helps ^_^ J.
Constructive criticism obviously hasn't had any impact on you whatsoever.
Storytelling skills need improvement
You are a ridiculously talented artist and animator, but there was so many little annoying things that distracted me from the actual story itself.
That first background outside the house with the cute little cars was awesome, after seeing that I was focusing on more backgrounds, but almost straight away they weren't half as good as that opening.
That was super distracting.
Also, I feel like the color of the main characters are a little bit dull, like just A TAD gray.
The voices (I'm sorry) are horribly unlikable. Especially the kid with the hat, he's such an annoying character, just from the way he talks.
Also the pacing of the conversation is really slow, there's mad pauses every time they speak.
The thing that annoyed me most was how you edited the music. You had it fade out for when Neenja was putting on his gear. I felt it would have been way more epic, if it just started abruptly with no fade in and the camera just started on his eyes or something.
Also sound was a major issue. The mic quality is decent, but maybe learn to add reverb, when they're standing in an open street it still sounds like your speaking in a small room.
Some minor sound effects were kinda shabby too, like when the massive guy bursts through the wall, it felt half assed and really weak. The sound going out of sync ruined the whole experience too.
You have a great concept for a great series, I just don't wanna see you ruin it due to little things that can be easily fixed.
When tingle breaks in
I cannot help but shit myself at the facial expressions. I'm also a sucker for the color, nice one man.
Daw Mister Sean
Keep on improvin' ya hear!
i hear ya loud and clear sir
I really love this
o.o !! your are Oney
thanks for the music and character cameos guys, keep at it, practise your art, and make the story more readable. the sound was very well recorded!
WOH? Thank you Oney, I wasnt sure how you would react to me borrowing you characters im glad enjoyed it. Thanks :) your criticism means a bundle to me! Ill take it to heart!
You're so much better than I could ever be JohnnyUtah! Please teach me your magical ways!
oh don't be so hard on yourself!
I really love how this literally has nothing to do with tankman, and doesn't stay true to the series at all, except the whole black and white thing.
I've reviewed your stuff before and I've left certain comments on various things that you could improve on, but a year has passed and nope. nothing's changed.
You're done? Correction: You're an asshole. I re-read your reviews and already noticed that I had made the changes you seem to think I owe you. Big surprise, I don't owe you anything.
So for everyone who's going to read this let me lay out everything on the table:
Oneys Tmot2:bad signal review
"was pretty good. i beg you though, try to stop using those smoke effects, they look awful, and that red squiggly frame in all your toons just ruins the mood. also combining line tool and brush tool looks sloppy, use one or the other!"
This was the last toon I ever used line tool animation on. Tankmen"Tankbusters was all Brush done. As for the smoke effects I like them. they didnt really fit this toon as it was serious yes...But I like the over stylization of smoke.
I stopped using the Red Border that hes bitching about after Tmot Ep3.
Oneys tankmen:Tankbusters review
"I had to turn it off...
Sloppy pen tool, boring animation, COMPLETELY unrelated humor and random assed video game music? Bad comedic timing, and I didn't like the Character design, you basically just threw in a bunch of video game related everythings without thinking about what you were doing.
Sorry, It wasn't for me."
As I stated before I didn't use the pen tool for this toon. Thanks for giving my toon a chance what with you turning it off because of the character designs.
Oney's Tmot ep3 review...
"4 for some effort..."
I'm gonna try my best here to not sound harsh, but man you need to improve. Every single toon of yours i've seen has been exactly the same in visuals and story. Also, that horrible red frame is in every single one of your toons, it's pointless and ugly, get rid of it. Learn some anatomy, the people look pretty silly sometimes, like the hands. Also the voice acting in this was god awful. Just trying to get you to improve."
Learn some Anatomy? You draw characters with heads longer than their torso's, eyes as long as forearms, and legs that are about 12 inches long. You're drawing caricatures of circus freaks regularly.
I've seen you do one toon with a character that's anatomy is almost right. Doing 100% perfect anatomy is damn hard, that's why so many animators out there develop a comfortable style around basic anatomy. Talk to me about Anatomy when you got 5 or 6 of those under your belt. If y
Based off the reviews of yours that I've read you seem to think you're better than myself and the rest of the NG animators, You bitch about everyone else s art style despite the fact that your primary art style looks like 'Dr.Katz' without 'squiggle vision', and since you're complainign about the shot angles I use, you only use about half a dozen shot angles for your toons, and at least 70% of them are just the character facing the audience.
I'd say I'm surprised by your behavior but you're only 19. Well guess what dipshit: The world doesn't revolve around you. So if you're going to act like your some kind of prodigy, just because you have toons that are above average in quality, get over yourself. Only two people like assholes in this world, Proctologists and San Franciscans.
And here's another lesson for you to learn: There's always someone out there who's better than you, and I can name at least 10 newgrounds animators that put you to shame.
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